Comments on: How not to get a book published

By: Toonhead!

Toonhead! — Sun, 18 Mar 2007 21:31:08 +0000

I didn’t think you were allowed to expose the secrets of Dianetics.

By: Orange

Orange — Sat, 17 Mar 2007 03:20:51 +0000

I just hope Winston Breen has enough exclamation points to out-sell Space Ark!

By: Adam

Adam — Fri, 16 Mar 2007 22:11:01 +0000

but Farhod Azarbaydjani (amonog others) loved it!!

By: Francis

Francis — Fri, 16 Mar 2007 16:49:29 +0000

If you’re scoring exclamation points, there are a lot of bonus points in this author’s future, judging from the rest of the excerpt.

By: Orange

Orange — Fri, 16 Mar 2007 14:44:04 +0000

The second sentence is better: “Her three natural human sisters, whom the Androgynyns resurrected within bioreactors from the dust of Hearth, went on to resurrect all her brothers and sisters from the Earth including her Androgynyn Twins Destiny and Dreamer whom had been created while the expedition was still in Space to complete those new Flying Pyramids!” (Super triple bonus points for “whom” and the exclamation point.)